Presentation Feedback

 For part of our planning for the extract we were asked to present what ideas and the plot of our story that we had so far. We were then given feedback from the class about what was good and what we could do better.

The feedback that we had been given proved to be very useful and so we have made some significant changes to our extract so it can be even better.

For example, a question that did keep coming up was, if we were going to show how the colleague died and if we would follow his story. We decided that we would not show the colleagues death and so that would add to the mystery of them finding out who the killer was without knowing the exact way he had died.

By doing this it also made the opening easier to make as we did not have to film two different people in separate locations.

We also had decided that our main characters name Hugh Green, was a bit too "old school" and so we will be coming up with a more modern and gripping name as the name was also brought up in the feedback.